It may be hard to get past the paywall for this Wall Street Journal celebration of theater by Joe Queenan, my old friend and collaborator on four plays — Alms, Grudges, Genealogy, and The Oracle, but it’s well worth the effort. Joe enthuses (a rare occurrence) about putting on a play right now with a young cast and director and felt rejuvenated by people “who were still excited about their futures” and didn’t talk about their orthotics. 🙂
And, yes, of course, I am the old friend referenced in the first paragraph (who wears orthotics and has talked about them — they’re great and with that battered body of Joe’s from our basketball days Queenan should get some.)
Joe on the far right looking scheming how to turn this photo into one of his WSJ columns Photo Bill Wadman
I owe my 2018 return to theater after over thirty years away in large measure to Joe Queenan and I’m glad to see him succeeding with his latest effort The Counterfeit Moron, which only has one more performance left at 2 PM on March 2 at The Chain Theater as part of their Winter One Act Festival. I’m not sure if it’s sold out — the first 3 shows were — but The Chain often has last-minute walk-up tickets usually if you happen by 36 Street and 8th Avenue on Sunday. Terrific performances by friends and colleagues Ed Altman and Jasmine Dorothy Haefner as well as newcomer and star of Joe’s upcoming film Top Hate Tut Gregory Go Joe!
You did it! The house opened, the seats filled, lights dimmed, and then rose again in the proper pattern to illuminate your story and the marvelous set constructed for this occasion. The actors costumed brilliantly moved and spoke as you imagined. Well, mostly as you imagined because the direction and their own imagination have brought new layers to the work. And now if you have done the job of publicity successfully, you’ll get to read some reviews. Don’t let them affect you too much.
(While the initial premise of this series — 13 Ways of Looking at Self-Producing — limited the observations about the experience of playwrights putting on their own work to thirteen perspectives, we only mentioned reviews glancingly in that sequence, and their rigors, realities, and ramifications deserve more attention. This post — a Bakers Dozen plus one — corrects that omission.)
Why do I offer that advice? Foundationally, I agree with the great poet and essayist Louise Gluck about what it takes to be a writer, which she described in a somewhat negative way explaining why her own father did not become a writer:
“…my father wanted to be a writer. But he lacked certain qualities: lacked the adamant need which makes it possible to endure every form of failure; the humiliation of being overlooked, the humiliation of being found moderately interesting, the unanswerable fear of doing work that, in the end, really isn’t more than moderately interesting, the discrepancy, which even the great writers live with (unless, possibly, they attain great age) between the dream and the evidence.”
Louise Gluck
In order to read the reviews usefully, you need those qualities even the best player in the best production is going to be viewed by someone out there with access to a website as a critic as having failed or only been found moderately interesting. It is highly likely that the ‘evidence’ of the review will be discrepant with whatever you and your team held as the ‘dream’.
DISCLAIMER: my relationship with feedback on plays resides in the eccentric column. I’m not looking for opinions about the work in the same way that many of my colleagues do. It just wouldn’t work for me. Jean Cocteau offers advice that makes sense to me: “Listen carefully to first criticisms made of your work. Note just what it is about your work that critics don’t like — then cultivate it. That’s the only part of your work that’s individual and worth keeping.” My process of writing and rewriting and then rewriting again depends almost exclusively upon my ‘familiars’: team members who have been with me from even before the eight productions of Knowledge Workings Theater, actors that I know trust, and a few other friends whose taste matters to me. So, the disclaimer is that I start off differently in my encounters with reviews than many other playwrights.
But there is a significant difference between getting feedback in forms like this one or NPS and getting a review. The wisdom of Edna St. Vincent Millay comes to mind “A person who publishes a book willfully appears before the populace with his pants down. If it is a good book nothing can hurt him. If it is a bad book nothing can help him.” And that’s just a book that might not even have your picture on the inside flap. In the case of the self-production of a play, the situation seems to be more full frontal nudity instead of just ‘depantsing’.
Previously in this series, we cited David Mamet’s assertion that “the correct study of the dramatist was neither his own feelings, nor those of the actors, but the attention of the audience.” Reviewers are certainly part of the audience, but I believe they need a different framing in considerations of self-producing. When we heed icons like Sarah Bernhardt stating that “The theatre is the involuntary reflex of the ideas of the crowd”, we should acknowledge that there is a segmenting in the crowd. Audience members do not all come with the same mindset. There are those who know our work and have returned, there are those who only know us and finally have decided to see one of our plays, there are those with whom we are unacquainted who have come to this particular play based upon some recommendation or report, there are those who came because it was a free ticket because as a producer you are wisely papering the house in preview week, and there are reviewers. We can roughly categorize each of those groups as arriving with a different mindset and even individual peculiarities, but the reviewer’s disposition merits a more specific examination. So, scroll a little further.
Your reviews aren’t all going to be like these.
Like any other member of the audience, a reviewer is going to project their own lives and experiences onto what you have written. And unless your play is Our Town, its content likely focuses on a particular dimension: families, workplaces, wars, etc. how will that work appear to audiences that have different experiences and perhaps no familiarity at all with the world of your story? Although you would already have these concerns as a playwright, you as the producer also have additional worries as to how viewers react to their work. After the first week, word-of-mouth especially in its contemporary version of posts and comments on social media platforms assumes a criticality in attracting audiences. And people do read reviews. There are dozens of little websites in the New York City metropolitan area for example that publish reviews of plays. Some of them have a specific theatrical emphasis and others or more general appealing to senior citizens or residents of a particular neighborhood. Getting reviews means getting attention, credibility, notice. But what you do with reviews is important not only for your success but also for your sanity. (Especially true for the actors reading this as Tom Briggs suggests here.)
Why impose this qualification? Because not all of the people writing reviews have a background in theater, dramaturgy, or even entertainment. Your reviewer might have spent their whole life as a dancer and political activist and your play is about the corporate world. That likely will result in a different sort of review than if your reviewer had to deal with bureaucracies because of their straight job or even just because their host organization is large enough to have such structures. Similarly, if your reviewer has spent most of their career as a financial analyst then you’re going to have that worldview seep into their opinions about your play.
Will this appearance of reviewers with limited or stilted experience matter in every situation? Probably not. Our first production, alms, which we unwisely mounted without any PR, publicity, or marketing advice didn’t get any reviews even though it sold out all of its performances. We learned from that circumstance and budgeted for the kind of consultation that does get you reviews. And in some cases, they have been uniformly positive. We still think it’s important not to pay to much attention to them.
But what if the reviews are missing the point? Our approach is simple: the only thing Iwant from a review is a pull quote. It doesn’t matter whether they like what I have written or hate it or misunderstand it. The job of a self-producing playwright is to find the most positive phrase you can and use that in your advertising. This is a long-standing practice of producers in movies and theater; check out this 1987 LA Times piece on the ploy. In fact, there was once a controversy in which the New York Times complained that quotes were being taken out of context.. (For more on David Merrick including his scheme to find people with the same names as prominent reviewers to offer their positive opinions, scroll down within this article and this one that are very good surveys of the effect of reviewers upon audience size.)
DISCLAIMER #2: I have practiced the art of the selective pull quote. (Apparently, this is not a good idea to do if your play is opening in the EU according to this 16-year-old Guardian article.) At the end of our week run, we received a review that was… less than affirming. We weren’t going to use it in marketing anyway because all of our ad and publicity budget was gone, but we did use it in a post. Nothing in the review seemed usable, but our wonderful PR guy Ron Lasko at Spin Cycle disagreed when I told him that. Here’s the review and here’s what Ron selected:
“Compelling… The strengths of the play lie in its situation, its embrace of ambiguity, and its recognition that people are, well, people.“
Show Showdown
Pretty nifty. And anyone who wants to read the entire review from that source can certainly get the catalogue of weaknesses that were identified. I offer this additional way of looking at self-producing in the same spirit that informed the original compilation of thirteen: we need to make theater live. That takes talent and guts. There may be reviews that are negative and yet in some way accurate, and we will learn from those along the way. But not while we’re in the process of trying to put audiences in front of our actors and vice versa. We all would to our team to do the best we can and then absorb the learnings as to how we can do better.
Practice the art of the pull-quote with your reviews and don’t let them pull you down. But do let us know what you think as a self-producing or other kind of playwright. We’d love to hear and read your considerations on this subject.
PS Here’s what ChatGPT said about our play; AI is more sophisticated than I imagined considering they didn’t actually pay for a ticket or show up even to claim a comp.
Ronnee (Alinca Hamilton) turns the tables on Don (Ed Altman) in HONOR
FULL ADVANTAGE!
“Alinca Hamilton takes full advantage of this space and, acting with her body and face as well as with her words, letting the audience see her reactions, is quite funny…, showing us the ridiculousness of the situation.”
Roberta Pikser, Theater-Wire.Net
We knew that about Alinca as Ronnee Emerson but seeing Roberta Pikser’s review of HONOR in Theater-Wire.Net proved a gratifying confirmation and commendation of our colleague’s superb talent. Come to the Gene Frankel Theatre in lively NoHo neighborhood of Manhattan and see for yourself but you’ll have to do so before October 6th when this run where Alinca is joined by her two partners in corporate comedy, John Blaylock and Ed Altman ends.
“The play suggests that such a thing as honor is all but impossible, at least in a corporate setting, or perhaps that the concept is totally subjective, that no one really knows what it is. White male privilege is touched upon as one aspect of the elusiveness of the concept. Perhaps, as suggested by the insistence of the two men not to listen to each other, but to try to prevail, the idea of honor comes down to dominance. “
You have to see HONOR the play that Andrew Cortes of
Bold assertion: you should go see Alinca Hamilton in HONOR at the Gene Frankel Theatre running now through October 6th ONLY at the Gene Frankel Theater 24 Bond Street in the NoHo neighborhood of Manhattan. Tix at our.show/honor
Ronnee (Alinca Hamilton) attempts to referee the constant conflict of Don (Ed Altman) and Ludwig (John Blaylock, seated)
Why? Her performance compels, charms, and cheers in this comedy of corporate culture in ways that you won’t want to miss. You can read more about Alinca here and you can actually hear her via the Stage Whisper podcast of Andrew Cortes, but what would really be to your advantage is to see and listen to Alinca in this play: she’s terrific! We believe in her so much that we are offering you two (2) complimentary tickets to any of our performances of HONOR. Alinca has to be seen. Just reply to this email with your preferred performance date for your free tickets. Her performance is worth a lot more than that.
Oh, what’s the play about, the comedy by T.J. Elliott that actress Sean Young called “hilarious and very clever“? In HONOR, three executives (John Blaylock, Alinca Hamilton, and Ed Altman) meet to review the results of an investigation into a charge of bullying against one of them. In the course of a raucous and rollicking meeting, a free-for-all ensues that tests the outer limits of propriety and procedure. With sharp humor and witty tactics, each brings their own concept of “honor” to the table for debate, only to be left wondering what constitutes honor in our present world. The running time of HONOR is just over an hour, which leaves you plenty of time to enjoy the fine restaurants and nightlife in this lively neighborhood.
We are grateful to Broadway World for its interview of T.J. Elliott, Playwright & Director of HONOR, which opens September 19 at the Gene Frankel Theatre and runs until October 6. You can read the full interview here as Joshua Wright talks to T.J. about his journey from theater to the corporate world and back again to theater in 2018. T.J. also speaks about the importance of Joe Queenan, his collaborator on the plays alms, grudges, genealogy, and the Oracle, in his return to playwrighting as well as the circumstances that prompted him to write this latest play, HONOR. Tickets to honor are available at our.show/honor
We appreciate the generous and enthusiastic responses of these two audience members from our run at The Chain Winter One-Act Festival this past February, but you should come and see for yourself.
Given that I’ve been in rewriting mode around my latest play, I found this piece about Lucas Hnath, which originally appeared in the New Yorker, very helpful. I don’t know if I’m mystical about rewriting but at times the process does seem to require a metaphysical approach; i.e., is this thing being created acquiring a coherent existence?
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“He can sound mystical about his creative process. At workshops, I’ve heard him say many times, “This line hasn’t figured out yet what it wants to become.” But he can also be stringently analytical. Playwright’s Input A should result in Audience Output B. That side was in evidence at the Golden, as the seats began to fill. (The preview was sold out.) I asked him what he’d be looking out for that evening, and he said that it was important that he not look for anything. He wanted to experience the play as if he’d never seen it. This, he emphasized, would be just the start of his process. “You have to watch several performances,” he went on. “Then take a step back and try to understand, on average, how the play works. It’s what remains consistent across many performances that tells me something useful. Tonight is one single data point.”
He hoped to next time find “a better spot” in the theatre. Another night found him in the stage manager’s office, listening to the actors on a monitor. He was rewriting their parts as they spoke.”
Read the detail below but click here to Sign up for a discussion on Playwright Self-Producing taking place 8:30 PM Wednesday September 25th after the 7PM performance of HONOR at 24 Bond Street at the Gene Frankel Theatre in Manhattan.
There is absolutely NO requirement or expectation that prospective attendees of the session will attend the playbeforehand. HONOR has a 7:00 PM curtain and a running time of 65 minutes; Therefore, any playwright is welcome to show up at 8:30PM just for this discussion on self-producing. There is NO fee for attending this playwright community gathering. If you wish to attend HONOR, go to our tickets site here and enter the discount code ‘playwright’ for $10 off the ticket price.
Back in March, I began to publish online a series of brief essays, 13 Ways of Looking at Self-Producing drawing upon my own experience as a playwright doing that double duty on eight stagings (three via Zoom) since 2018. I wrote then that during that period as a number of theaters closed and festivals suspended solicitations that “Finding ‘doom and gloom’ conversations at gatherings with playwrights was impossible to escape no matter what refreshments are served.” Given “that the current situation poses both novel and more frequent obstacles to production especially of new work”, I thought it a good idea to reflect publicly on lessons learned so far from self-producing. The response by readers was gratifying and affirming, which has led our company to sponsor a Wednesday September 25th session on self-producing for any interested playwrights in the NYC area. (Others from far-flung places are welcome to join us but this will be strictly an in-person event.)
Since our production of HONOR runs at the Gene Frankel Theatre in Manhattan, we decided to hold the session on playwrights self-producing after one of the performances. Attendance discussion is FREE and there is absolutely NO requirement or expectation that prospective attendees of the session will attend the play beforehand. HONOR has a 7:00 PM curtain and a running time of 65 minutes; Therefore, any playwright is welcome to show up at 8:30 PM to participate in this session on self producing. If you do wish to attend the play first, that’s fine. Go to our tickets website and enter the discount code ‘PLAYWRIGHT’ to get $10 off your ticket price.
“If there’s no place to put on your play, you can’t learn to write a play, because you learn from the audience.”
David Mamet
Why are we doing this? Three reasons: 1) The playwright community that has nourished us is important and gatherings can make us stronger 2) We don’t know everything and we’d like to benefit from and yet also contribute to ‘the wisdom of [playwright] crowds’ 3) We keep coming back to a David Mamet insight: “If there’s no place to put on your play, you can’t learn to write a play, because you learn from the audience.”
Sooooooo……
Sign up for a discussion on Playwright Self-Producing taking place 8:30 PM Wednesday September 26th after the 7PM performance of HONOR at the Gene Frankel Theatre at 24 Bond Street in Manhattan
David Hare influenced me greatly not only by his plays but through his superb little book, Acting Up, about his experience performing his one man show. One of the passages there turned into part of my own practice: telling the story again and again. Maintaining that grip on the storytelling aspect of a play can get slippery as we move through the writing. Consequently, following Hare’s (and Louis Malle’s) advice, at some point, I even write down the story because it identifies glitches, inconsistencies, and excesses just as you get the feeling when telling a story to friends or family that it’s too long or complicated.. Here is how Hare explained how he came to do this:
“Louis (Malle) shared my fascination with techniques of storytelling. Once, we were meant to be working together on Damage, the film of Josephine Hart’s novel. But I came into the restaurant for supper usually dissatisfied with that morning’s read-through of the play of mine called Murmuring Judges. ‘It ought to bloody work,’ I said, ‘and it doesn’t.’ At once Louis asked me to tell him the story of the play. Together we sat for three hours, refining the narrative. Louis isolated every component of the story, and then put them all back together again in the right order. It was like watching a great car mechanic lay out the pieces of an engine on a clean white cloth before reassembling them. He did it for the sheer intellectual pleasure.… (After writing the synopsis of Damage) Every morning he would make me sit down under the vines and go back to the beginning of the story. He did it so many times that I thought I was going to go mad.”